Blog feedback
Reflection: Classmates feedback is very helpful. Although for blogs it isn't the type of feedback like editing or help revise something. I like hearing my classmates opinions and their advice. This blog was about my research process. Jenny suggested to look at a youtube video about it and I found one that really helped me go in the right direction. Their responses made me feel I was headed in the right direction and made me feel confident about my process as well as my topic.
Feedback to a blog
Reflection: Feedback is important especially positive feedback. Most people focus on the negative but it is important to reinforce and let them know what they did well. I think my feedback to a classmates blog is good and I explain what was done well about their blog as well as agreeing. My responses are useful and helpful but I don't tend to focus on grammar.
Rough draft Genre piece feedback
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This piece was a rough, rough draft so as a writer, I didn't feel accomplished. Specifically, I didn't feel accomplished about my organization and felt that my information didn't flow through each paragraph. Your feedback was very helpful though. It helped me organize my paper better and take out unecessary information. Comment 9,10, and 14 especially helped me realize that it didn't flow and I need to find more of connection as well as explanations. Also, It made me realize what was important and what I needed to add to make my paper better. It made me feel that my paper was very under developed but I knew that when I submitted it. I had a hard time figuring out how to write my introduction and after reading this feedback as well as learning about it in class, I was able to write a strong introduction.
Research PROPOSAL Feedback
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Reflection: My research proposal was how I was going to go about my research project and what I needed to do/complete. Your feedback was helpful and although this paper doesn't show what you wanted me to add/work on, it shows your approval and you told me what you liked about it. For example, some of my inquiry questions you thought were a good starting point but you did suggest I add more/ better ones and gave me examples in our conference. I think providing examples is better for me and I am able to understand it more clearly and know exactly what is good and what is not good. My research proposal was a good starting point and a guide for me throughout the entire process.